Writing enhancement for our fifth grade classroom.
Tuesday, April 24, 2007
Jordan and JoJo
First JoJo met the cat. Then he saw my dirtbikes. He just had to sit on them. He watched me do my homework. Then we ate dinner and hung out with my family. Lastly, we watched T.V.
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Jordan it sounds and looks realy fun at your house with jojo. Also i like your story.
First JoJo met the cat. Then he saw my dirtbikes. He just had to sit on them. He watched me do my homework. Then we ate dinner and hung out with my family. Lastly, we watched T.V.
15 comments:
Jordan it sounds and looks realy fun at your house with jojo. Also i like your story.
jordan your day semms small with everything you do with jo-jo.
nice dirtbikes!
Jordan it Sounds like you and jojo had fun at your house.
nice job
Jordan it look lik Jojo had fun!!!!!!!
What did you watch on t.v.
nice story it sounded fun.alooooooott of fun:-)
that was really short.
Sounds like yoy had fun.
wow not alout of writing jordan next time you should write more ok but still great job and i like the pics too...
Jordan, I think you weote WAY to MUCH! Did your cat like Jojo?
I love your cats name(Sunny)!
Jordan I like your DirtBikes.How fast can they go???
SYDNEY WHAT DOES WEOTE MEAN???IT DOSENT EVEN MAKE SINCE
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