Around 9:00 we ate snickers from my brother's party that he had the day before. We ate so much candy that I got sick and threw up. Jo-Jo slept at my feet because he didn’t want to get sick. He wondered if I wanted to play or if I was asleep. The next day Jo-Jo and I didn’t get up tell 1:00pm. Jo-Jo saw a beast outside and I told him it was Taz my dog. He was so eager to go see him that he wanted to go through a wall to see him. I put Jo-Jo on top of Taz’s head!!!
He wanted to go outside and play anything. He was going to play basketball and soccer. He figured out that he could play both. When he played basketball he got stuck in the net trying to dunk the ball and during soccer he saved every goal that was shot.
On Sunday his dream came true!!! He was able to get though a wall to get to the dog. My dad popped a hole in the wall that morning. He was so excited that he went through it and said hi to Taz all day. I didn’t have to do anything all day with him because of the hole. Taz and him became friends and played tug a war.
11 comments:
Nick, You did an amazing job. I love all your ideas and effort. You were very organized as you wrote. Most of all, your humor came out in your writing. That is called "Voice" and is not seen often in elementary student's writing. Great job. I hope the class gets to see all the other shots you took. They are hilarious.
nick your pic is funny
I like how you put jojo in the net nick. you did a great job.
why did your dad pop a hole in the wall?
wat did they play tug of war?
Did he like the dog food.
How did he like the dog food?
Did Jojo wathe a moive Nick C ?
Wow! Lots of writing, good work, Nick!
Your dog is scarry!
The snow channel.
Thats my FAVORITE!!!
Nice writing Nick!
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